I'm pleased to host Joyce Schneider as she discusses the medical plot elements of her medical thriller Embryo.
Embryo’s plot: An intern is determined to investigate tragedies at a famous fertility & genetic engineering hospital. My husband, a physician of endless patience, helped with the medical details, which I interwove into this story idea that nagged and wouldn’t let go.
Details: “Maria Moran’s first inkling of trouble was the coppery taste in her mouth. It came suddenly, a rushing whoosh of something that made her gag, and when she reached to wipe her mouth, her hand came away smeared with blood.”
So begins this thriller about a young intern, Jill Raney, determined to investigate tragedies and terror at a famous fertility and genetic engineering hospital. When two pregnant women die and a fetus is delivered with severe chromosomal abnormalities, Jill’s superiors - including handsome, smitten-with-her resident David Levine – insist there’s no common link.
But her suspicions deepen with the grotesque murder near the hospital of another pregnant woman - her belly drained of amniotic fluid. And when a woman miscarries in the hospital and then disappears, Jill frantically searches for her - following a terrifying path that seems to link all the victims: Is someone playing with life...and the structures of human life itself?
An unforgettable tale of suspense with a shocking denouement, Embryo takes you deep into the mind of malignant genius.
What is special about Jill Rainey? “The job” is vitally important to her, but on her terms. She is strong, smart and brave, someone you like right away – but she also questions every premise and order from superiors; she sees what others don’t or won’t see and takes independent, determined action. This includes falling in love when superiors warn her against it. She’s stubborn! Her own woman!
Why does this novel stand out? A story about malignant geniuses tinkering with IVF and human genetic engineering hasn’t been done before. Some will call this sci/fi, but the technology is really there. That’s what’s scary and why this idea wouldn’t let go. The irony is that Jill’s profession should never have drawn her into suspenseful situations. Her profession should be about saving lives; bringing joyous new lives into the world. But the famous hospital she chose to train in staffs scientists monkeying with life to terrible consequences – and that’s what unexpectedly draws in this brilliant young woman.
Something else that’s unique here is EMBRYO’S fast pace. For example David Levine is a terrific OB/GYN surgeon. This is shown in as few words as possible. Here he has begun a C-section: “His hand moved so fast that it looked as if he’d drawn a red line. He made a single midline incision from below the navel to the pubis. It was a shallow cut, through the skin and subcutaneous tissue only. Beads of blood enlarged and spilled down both sides of the abdomen.” There’s a bit more, but no need to go into pages and pages of textbook surgical description. That’s boring and slows the urgency.
A timely and frightening idea, super characters, and fast pacing are what makes
EMBRYO a can’t-put-down thriller and a real page turner.