Showing posts with label Carol Moncado. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Carol Moncado. Show all posts

Thursday, January 3, 2013

Eight Questions: New Authors

Last week, I did a blog post that answered these eight questions about my current wip. You can find the post here. It's all about Peril which will follow Poison-- releasing here in Feb.

1. What is the working title of your book?

2. Where did the idea come from for the book?

3. What genre does your book fall under?

4. What's the synopsis of your book?

5.  Will you book be self-published or represented by an agency?

6. How long did it take you to write the first draft of your manuscript?

7. What other books would you compare this sotry to within your genre?

8. What else about your book might pique a reader's interest?

So check out the following authors and their eight questions!

Anita Brooks: http://brooksanita.com/eight-questions-why-did-i-write-this-book

Dena Ratliff Dyerhttp://denadyer.typepad.com/my_weblog/2013/01/a-resource-for-wounded-women.html

Sheila Hollingheadhttp://www.sheilahollinghead.com/2012/12/the-next-big-thing.html

Laura McClellan: http://bellewoodfarm.blogspot.com/

Carol Moncadohttp://carolmoncado.wordpress.com/2013/12/03/questions-about-my-wip/

Enjoy!


Monday, May 23, 2011

Medical Question: Bleeding after Delivery

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Carol Asks: A woman has a baby in a major US city. Right now I've got her basically bleeding to death when they can't stop post partum hemorrage. I don't know why she's hemorraging [and in the text I've left it at 'we can't stop the bleeding'] and the doc takes her to have a hysterectomy [which her hubby is told will take a couple hours?]. She then dies in surgery. I've left it pretty vague because I can't find any stats or anything. I'm glad in one sense because that means it doesn't happen very often, but doesn't help me with research.

Do you have any suggestions? Or if I leave it vague [it's his memory - it's gonna be blurry at best] is that good enough?



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Jordyn Says: Carol, thanks so much for your question. I did some searching on Google under "causes of post-partum hemorrhage" because, medically this is what is happening to your character. Here are some of the causes:
1. Uterine atony: After a child is delivered, the uterus should contract down to "clamp off" all the blood vessels that are bleeding. This is what the OB nurse is checking for after delivery. The uterus should feel "hard as a rock". If it doesn't, it may feel boggy (mushy), and the OB nurse will massage it to get it to firm up. If the uterus won't firm up, clamp down on those blood vessels, the patient will continue to bleed.

http://www.uptodate.com/contents/overview-of-postpartum-hemorrhage

2. Other causes: Retained placental tissue (where parts of the placenta stay inside the uterus), laceration of tissues or blood vessels in the pelvis and genital tract (a laceration would be a cut), and maternal coagulopathies (some sort of bleeding disorder in the mother where the blood is unable to clot). An additional, though uncommon, cause is inversion of the uterus during placental delivery (this is where the uterus would be turned inside out).

This is a good overview:

http://emedicine.medscape.com/article/796785-overview

Photo from: http://blog.timesunion.com/parenting/1626/the-line-on-your-pregnant-belly-will-go-away-%E2%80%94-eventually/

Hope this is helpful. What suggestions do you have for Carol? We'll have to see if Heidi is able to weigh in!

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Carol Moncado lives with her husband in Southwest Missouri. When she isn’t writing Inspirational Romance or Romantic Suspense, she’s teaching American Government at a community college, hanging out with her four kids, reading, or watching NCIS. You can find her at: http://www.carolmoncado.com/, http://www.carolmoncado.wordpress.com/ , and her newest blog, Pentalk Community Blog, where she serves as editor-in-chief: http://www.pentalkcommunity.blogspot.com/ .

Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Medical Question: Carol's Answer

Last post, Carol provided a detailed question for a manuscript in progress about giving Benadryl to a 2y/o boy who some nasty kidnappers have taken. They want the child to be quiet. The child is rescued by the police and taken to the ER. What is treatment in the ER for this fiction scenario? Check last Wednesday’s post for her full question.
Benadryl can be a tricky drug, particularly in the pediatric population. I am a pediatric ER nurse and have seen lots of kids get Benadryl and get too much Benadryl. The issue is this... an appropriate dose may make them sleepy but not knock them out. A child in a high stress situation may not get sleepy because his adrenaline may counteract the effects of the Benadryl. If you give more than the appropriate dose of Benadryl, they can actually begin to have toxic effects and are not very sleepy at all. In fact, they can be more like little Tasmanian devils.
I think a better choice for your fiction scenario might be a sleeping pill or tranquilizer. Something your nefarious characters may have around via prescription. Now, I’m going to defer publishing a drug and appropriate dosing here as you can find that yourself by Googling “tranquilizer dosing in kids/pediatrics” and it will give you several drug names. From those drug names you can Google the drug by typing “(drug) dosing in pediatrics). The pill could be crushed and given in something like a spoon full of pudding. A tranquilizer will have a more predictable effect than Benadryl. I think the EMS response is reasonable considering his vital signs.
In the ER, we're going to assume worst case scenario. If he was kidnapped (I'm assuming he has been given that the cops rescue him), we're going to assume the kidnappers may have given him other bad things. Standard treatment for drug ingestion is to draw blood for salicylic acid (Aspirin) and acetaminophen (Tylenol) levels. Probably baseline labs are in order to check his blood electrolytes.
We'll want his urine for a urine drug screen. This will check for common drugs of abuse and also prove that he was given a tranquilizer if the kidnappers aren't forthright with what they did give him. If we know the child received the drug within 60 minutes of his arrival to the ED, the physician may choose to give activated charcoal, which is a substance given orally to help absorb the drug from the stomach. He'll be placed on a monitor and observed for several hours until the drug wears off and he’s back to his normal baseline.
Hospital admission is unlikely as long as he does well during his ER observation period and we feel he’ll be in safe hands with the mother. We'll take a good look over his skin... checking for unusual bruising that may indicate he'd been abused/injured.
The circumstances of the child's kidnapping are unclear. We would contact the police but it is clear that the police are involved in your scenario. This is a situation where we will also involve social work as well either for support of the mother, over concern for the child if we felt a parent's negligence was a factor in the kidnapping, or family dynamics were concerning… say there’s an acrimonious divorce and the mother states the father was involved in the kidnapping. These factors could increase conflict in your story.
What other factors can increase conflict in Carol’s story?

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Carol Moncado lives with her husband in Southwest Missouri. When she isn’t writing Inspirational Romance or Romantic Suspense, she’s teaching American Government at a community college, hanging out with her four kids, reading, or watching NCIS. You can find her at: http://www.carolmoncado.com/, http://www.carolmoncado.wordpress.com/ , and her newest blog, Pentalk Community Blog, where she serves as editor-in-chief: http://www.pentalkcommunity.blogspot.com/ .

Monday, April 11, 2011

Medical Question: Using Medication to Subdue Kidnapped Child in Manuscript


Carol asks the following question concerning a manuscript in progress:
2yo boy is given a drug [I'm thinking Benadryl but open to suggestions] to keep him quiet for several hours. He's rescued by his mom/cops and put in the ambulance to head for the ER.
When they find him [about 5 hrs after being taken], his pulse is strong but a bit on the slow side and his O2 is fine.  They hurry but no lights/sirens/etc. Does that sound right?
I'm thinking they would take him to the ER for observation and possibly admit to watch him until he's fully out of it.  Is there anything else they would do to counteract it?  Or just let it work its way out of his system as long as everything else looks good?  Start an IV since he's been out/sleeping for so long?  Are there any other concerns?
I don't want any long term affects of the drugs, just something they did to keep him under control.  How long they keep him [ER or admitted] will play a bit of a role in the story. I tried Googling Benadryl and all I got was info about using Benadryl for kids on flights, etc. [and most of that was criticizing, bashing, condemnation depending on the author of that particular post] which isn't quite what I need.
Any thoughts for Carol? How will your thoughts compare to mine? I’ll post my answer Wednesday.